I got this from Syrae Universe--Luv ya cyn!!!

I'm doing this on "Samayel".

1. Does your character have a long, rare or unusual name? [ or does he/she have a name that reflects your own name] +1

No. Um definately no.

2. Does your character have more than one name they go by? [not counting nick names] +1

Not at the moment, I may make up a nickname for Torin or Anri to call him. Probably not though.

3. [count all that apply]
He/she is not of their own race even though he/she looks like it? +1
Half a human? +1

Samayel is Wolfen, therefore not Human and not on Earth--so sort of I guess...

4. He/she belongs to a royal or well-to-do family? +1

Unfortunately Samayel is a slave at the Inn.

5. Does He/she have amnesia? +1

No

It heals as the story goes on? +1

No.

Looks

1. He/she has very long hair/antennae that curls on and on or horns with unusual color or an unusual colored skin tone for her race? +1

Um, no. Just long hair, a pelt, and absolutely adorable features--nope not even a tail on this one!!!

Does he/she have a considerably attractive face? [above average to you] +1

Yes

2. He/she has wings/can fly? +1

No. Torin does though

3. He/she has no fat and doesn't look chubby after eating junk and doesn't exercise +1

No. If he eats a lot, he'll get fat, but Torin will help him work it off.

4. Does he/she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1

Uke? Maybe. Technically? No.

5. His or her eyes are incredibly shiny and sparkly for no reason? +1

No.

6. His/her eyes have a weird color like silver or gold...maybe rainbow? +1

Just hazel.

7. Do you describe his/her looks in the first chapter? +1

First time appearing? Yes.

Do you use the words "gorgeous" "Mysterious" "Stunning" "Beautiful" "Perfect" for your female character or for a male character would you use "Dashingly handsome" "Muscular" "Charming" when describing him? +1

Um no. Definately not.

Past

1. He/she had a terrible past +1

Yeah, his past kinda sucks.

and he/she angsts about it +1

No.

2. Is he/she an orphan? +1

Technically? Yes, as his mother was a slave that died at the Inn.

3. Was he/she physicaly abused? +1

Yeah.

mentaly abused? +1

Yes.

molested/raped? +1

Um yep.

all the other characters know about it [especially cannon characters] +1

Yes, but it's apart of Samayel's role at the Inn--Torin does his best to curb it though, by purchasing him as his personal slave, so he put an end to it.

5. He/she saw a death of her family member +1

No.

it was his/her fault and thinks it's their own fault +1

No.

6. Is he or she related to any of the main cannon characters +1

No.

Character

1. He/She has a very dark or very cheery character +1

Not really, he's generally pretty giddy when around Torin, but other than that no.

2. He/She has no enemies +1

Enemies, no. Just rough customers.

3. He/She has no friends +1

Selected few friends.

4. He/She has a "Big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my Girlfriend/Boyfriend left me, there are so many other girls/boys in the world"] +1

Hell no.

5. He/She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1

Just Torin and Anri

6. Everyone who dislikes him/her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1

No.

Killed by her/him +1

No.

Killed by her boyfriend/girlfriend +1

Yeah, Torin kills Ranadu and takes Samayel away from the Inn.

7. He/She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1

Fails hard at that.

8. He/She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1

nope.

Romance

1. Your character seems to have experienced more romance than all the other characters in the story +1

Romance, no just with Torin. However he is more sexually adept than Torin is.

2. His/Her girlfriend/boyfriend is/was a cannon character +1

No.

more than one cannon character +1

No.
a character from a cannon couple +1

No.

a character you would like to have as girlfriend/boyfriend +1

No. Though both Torin and Samayel are smexy, I like Malakai better!!!

it was love from the first sight +1

Yeah pretty much.

3. A womanizer or slept with many guys? +1

Yes unfortunately Samayel has had many customers.

4. He/she had sex with a cannon character +1

Cannon? um I don't think so.

More than one cannon character +1

No.

A character you would like to have sex with +1

No.

Other

1. He/she's a musician +1

No.

An Invader +1

No.

A dancer +1

No..

Daughter/son of a prostitute +1

yeah kinda.

2. He/she's better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she`s good at. +1

Ehh, no.

3. He/she's not from cannon locations. +1

If this means she's not from the same city as the cannon, then yes.

He/she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1

No.

4. He/she doesn't have to pay for his/her actions/crimes/mistakes +1

not really. He just focuses on staying alive.

5. His/her enemies are complete opposites of him/her +1

Not entirely.

6. He/She looks and acts exactly like a cannon charecter with different color eyes, hair, and clothes +1

Oh FUCK NO.

To the anti-sue traits!

1. Remove one point if your character is a smoker.

No.

<2>. She has a disease that doesn't heal during the story -1

No

3. She has overweight [a little doesn't count] -1

No

4. She`s in love with a character who doesn't love her back -1

no.

5. She`s weak mentaly or physicaly -1

Nope. D:


Add em up: 13


results~

0-5 points- the Anti-Sue/Stu

Your character is definitely an opposite of Mary Sue. It's obvious that you've been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn't hurt.

5-15 points- Original Character

Congratulations! You've created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ you sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!

15-25 points- boarding-Sue/Stu

Hmm... I can't say your character is a Mary-sue or Stu, but it's really close to it! You should edit them a little to make him/her more realistic and interesting!

25-35 points the Mary-Sue/gary-Stu

My oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you've overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don't want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.

35< points the Ultra-Sue/Stu

OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You've created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character

Boo-yah. Looks like she's just fine the way she is.