Stole it from Cyn!!!!I'm doing this on "Samayel".
1. Does your character have a long, rare or unusual name? [ or does he/she have a name that reflects your own name] +1
No. Um definately no.
2. Does your character have more than one name they go by? [not counting nick names] +1
Not at the moment, I may make up a nickname for Torin or Anri to call him. Probably not though.
3. [count all that apply]
He/she is not of their own race even though he/she looks like it? +1
Half a human? +1
Samayel is Wolfen, therefore not Human and not on Earth--so sort of I guess...
4. He/she belongs to a royal or well-to-do family? +1
Unfortunately Samayel is a slave at the Inn.
5. Does He/she have amnesia? +1
No
It heals as the story goes on? +1
No.
Looks
1. He/she has very long hair/antennae that curls on and on or horns with unusual color or an unusual colored skin tone for her race? +1
Um, no. Just long hair, a pelt, and absolutely adorable features--nope not even a tail on this one!!!
Does he/she have a considerably attractive face? [above average to you] +1
Yes
2. He/she has wings/can fly? +1
No. Torin does though
3. He/she has no fat and doesn't look chubby after eating junk and doesn't exercise +1
No. If he eats a lot, he'll get fat, but Torin will help him work it off.
4. Does he/she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1
Uke? Maybe. Technically? No.
5. His or her eyes are incredibly shiny and sparkly for no reason? +1
No.
6. His/her eyes have a weird color like silver or gold...maybe rainbow? +1
Just hazel.
7. Do you describe his/her looks in the first chapter? +1
First time appearing? Yes.
Do you use the words "gorgeous" "Mysterious" "Stunning" "Beautiful" "Perfect" for your female character or for a male character would you use "Dashingly handsome" "Muscular" "Charming" when describing him? +1
Um no. Definately not.
Past
1. He/she had a terrible past +1
Yeah, his past kinda sucks.
and he/she angsts about it +1
No.
2. Is he/she an orphan? +1
Technically? Yes, as his mother was a slave that died at the Inn.
3. Was he/she physicaly abused? +1
Yeah.
mentaly abused? +1
Yes.
molested/raped? +1
Um yep.
all the other characters know about it [especially cannon characters] +1
Yes, but it's apart of Samayel's role at the Inn--Torin does his best to curb it though, by purchasing him as his personal slave, so he put an end to it.
5. He/she saw a death of her family member +1
No.
it was his/her fault and thinks it's their own fault +1
No.
6. Is he or she related to any of the main cannon characters +1
No.
Character
1. He/She has a very dark or very cheery character +1
Not really, he's generally pretty giddy when around Torin, but other than that no.
2. He/She has no enemies +1
Enemies, no. Just rough customers.
3. He/She has no friends +1
Selected few friends.
4. He/She has a "Big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my Girlfriend/Boyfriend left me, there are so many other girls/boys in the world"] +1
Hell no.
5. He/She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1
Just Torin and Anri
6. Everyone who dislikes him/her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
No.
Killed by her/him +1
No.
Killed by her boyfriend/girlfriend +1
Yeah, Torin kills Ranadu and takes Samayel away from the Inn.
7. He/She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1
Fails hard at that.
8. He/She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1
nope.
Romance
1. Your character seems to have experienced more romance than all the other characters in the story +1
Romance, no just with Torin. However he is more sexually adept than Torin is.
2. His/Her girlfriend/boyfriend is/was a cannon character +1
No.
more than one cannon character +1
No.
a character from a cannon couple +1
No.
a character you would like to have as girlfriend/boyfriend +1
No. Though both Torin and Samayel are smexy, I like Malakai better!!!
it was love from the first sight +1
Yeah pretty much.
3. A womanizer or slept with many guys? +1
Yes unfortunately Samayel has had many customers.
4. He/she had sex with a cannon character +1
Cannon? um I don't think so.
More than one cannon character +1
No.
A character you would like to have sex with +1
No.
Other
1. He/she's a musician +1
No.
An Invader +1
No.
A dancer +1
No..
Daughter/son of a prostitute +1
yeah kinda.
2. He/she's better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she`s good at. +1
Ehh, no.
3. He/she's not from cannon locations. +1
If this means she's not from the same city as the cannon, then yes.
He/she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1
No.
4. He/she doesn't have to pay for his/her actions/crimes/mistakes +1
not really. He just focuses on staying alive.
5. His/her enemies are complete opposites of him/her +1
Not entirely.
6. He/She looks and acts exactly like a cannon charecter with different color eyes, hair, and clothes +1
Oh FUCK NO.
To the anti-sue traits!
1. Remove one point if your character is a smoker.
No.
<2>. She has a disease that doesn't heal during the story -1
No
3. She has overweight [a little doesn't count] -1
No
4. She`s in love with a character who doesn't love her back -1
no.
5. She`s weak mentaly or physicaly -1
Nope. D:
Add em up: 13
results~
0-5 points- the Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character is definitely an opposite of Mary Sue. It's obvious that you've been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn't hurt.
5-15 points- Original Character
Congratulations! You've created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ you sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!
15-25 points- boarding-Sue/Stu
Hmm... I can't say your character is a Mary-sue or Stu, but it's really close to it! You should edit them a little to make him/her more realistic and interesting!
25-35 points the Mary-Sue/gary-Stu
My oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you've overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don't want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.
35< points the Ultra-Sue/Stu
OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You've created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character
Boo-yah. Looks like she's just fine the way she is.
